Narrative

Start here:  one sunny hot day a man named david was to hot to stand out by the sun so he thought that he should go for a swim so he bring all the staff he needs. He didn't want to go pools he wanted to go by a huge mountain with a waterfall. He was maori and pakeha. First he got there he looked down and saw the blue fresh water so he decided to jump with his rope in the water so he jumped. Mean while the sun started to go down so he used the rope to get up when he got up he got changed and sit at the edge of the river fall and watched the sunset.

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narrative plan

Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts	Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	Car crash
Intro 2 sentences
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHO WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	Lopi was a smart little boy who lived in Auckland. He was driving to go to work. He worked at the police station. He was a policeman. When Lopi go to work he saw a car crash.
Problem 5-10 sentences	He called the Firefighters and the Police. He ran to the car that crashed and tried to save the people in the car. He tried to open the door but he can’t even open it. Theres a little fire in the car.
Solution 5-10 sentences	The firefighters came and used the jaws of life to open the door. They take all the people out and the litttle fire got bigger. The firefighters get the hose and put the fire out.
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	Lopi keeps going to work.

Roomr Co-constructed narrative

Title: Room 7  Co-constructed narrative

Labels: writing

House on fire

Hear sirens going off - firemen are coming

Put the fire out with water hoses

Smoke is strong

Problem - there might be people inside?!

PS4 is still inside. - valuables

Clothes are inside.

Might be cats or dogs inside

Food is inside

Playing with matches

Fireplace

Playing fortnite- little boy poured water on the plug.

Little boy - craig. Blonde hair, 1 metre high, 8 years old, freckles, brown eyes, short curly hair, fortnite t shirt, drinking water, laughed and dropped the cup, or got angry, screamed.

Title	Fire in the house
Introduction	One sunny beautiful Saturday Craig was playing Fornite with his friend Jack. They had been playing all day long.
Orientation	Craig was a 8 year old boy with blonde, curly hair and chocolate brown eyes. He was wearing his favourite turquoise Fornite shirt and seafoam pants. Jack was 9 and had jet black hair and bright blue eyes. The two boys were playing Fornite in the lounge at Craig’s house. The lounge looked like a pigs sty, with stinky socks, pizza boxes and mountain dew cans everywhere.
Problem	Craig was sooo engrossed in his game. He leapt out of the bus, pressed X and landed on one of the houses. Craigs thumbs and fingers were starting to ache from playing for sooo long without a break. Jack thought a glass of water might wake him up, so he went to get his friend a cool glass of icy water. He was just strolling back into the messy lounge, when he heard Craig scream “OHHH YEAH HEADSHOT!”. It gave Jack such a fright that he dropped the glass of water, and “Oh no!” he screamed, it tipped straight onto the electrical plug. Craig sniffs “sniff sniff”, “I can smell smoke, is the oven on?”. Jack yells “THERE’S A FIRE, HELP!”. Craig finally looks up from his game to see that the PS4 caught on fire! Craig thought to himself “Dang it, I was about to win!”. The two boys rushed outside leaving all their valuables behind.
Solution	Jack ran to the neighbours house and asked to borrow Lucy’s phone. “HELP HELP OUR HOUSE IS ON FIRE!”. Craig could hear the sirens of the fire engines getting closer and closer. Jack and Craig tried to comfort each other, but they were panicking so much and couldn’t hear each other over the sirens and blaring smoke alarms. The firetrucks arrived and extinguish the flames in 1 long hour.
Conclusion	The two boys felt depressed. Their game was over, and they didn’t win. And now… their house was destroyed.

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