narrative plan

Brainstorm of ideas:

• Car crash, people inside the car, fire fighters, not looking, fire-fighters, man was driving then suddenly he crashed into a pole, speeding, different kinds of services - police and ambulance. Flipped,
• See - people standing around, glass on the ground, windshield or windscreen,  stop traffic, upside down, airbags, fire extinguishers,
• smell/hear - gasoline or petrol or oil, smoke, sirens, people talking

PEOPLE/SETTING	PROBLEM	SOLUTION
Drunk driver, John Cena, 60 year old man,	Car crash	A witness calls the ambulance, police and fire service
No glasses so couldn’t see	injuries - broken arm, broken ribs, brain damage, cuts	Fire fighters use jaws of life to get the person out and save them. They cut the car in half.
On the phone	Petrol leak, and the engine was gonna blow up, so the whole car was gonna blow up.	Fire extinguisher, put saw dust on the petrol, get the people out first before it explodes.
Distracting - picking something up, or changing the radio station.

Title:	Car crash
Intro 2 sentences
Orientation 5-10 sentences WHEN WHO WHAT WHERE WHY HOW CHARACTERS	Lopi was a smart little boy who lived in Auckland. He was driving to go to work. He worked at the police station. He was a policeman. When Lopi go to work he saw a car crash.
Problem 5-10 sentences	He called the Firefighters and the Police. He ran to the car that crashed and tried to save the people in the car. He tried to open the door but he can’t even open it. Theres a little fire in the car.
Solution 5-10 sentences	The firefighters came and used the jaws of life to open the door. They take all the people out and the litttle fire got bigger. The firefighters get the hose and put the fire out.
Conclusion Less than 5 sentences	Lopi keeps going to work.