Monday, April 9, 2018

today we want for a walk.

1 comment:

  1. Malo lelei Paula,
    It is 1 of you ex-classmates Edith; Today I thought I would give you some tips on how you can improve on your work. I love how you have added photos but maybe next time you could add more detail to your work to make sure it is on a Year 6 standard and that you are giving an introduction to your story so the readers know what you are talking about. You could also make your poster more eye-catching. I hope you take these tips because they can really help with your future blog posts.

    -Edith :D